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Dear Reader:

Some introductory passages from my work in process follow.  If your reviews are positive, I will release the complete story.  Enjoy it and I appreciate your reviews.
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                                              Paul R. Jenson

In an earlier time not too far away, lived a young boy in training for a history-making life.  His trainers are skilled at molding and developing people who have no ideals nor scruples;  people who are capable of focusing their efforts upon the successful completion of their assignments.  The products of this training regime will be wired to never surrender regardless of imminent failure or intense logical error.

This young Soviet boy, code named Will for his steadfastness, raised in his KGB family, was an excellent student assimilating his empirical studies quickly.  He garnered the adulation of all who knew him in the secret training grounds.  He was given a purpose of importance only dreamed of by his trainers;  they had been waiting for the perfect specimen for this most difficult assignment.  If successful, the world would be driven into chaos.   If unsuccessful, the organization would be exposed and self-destruct.

This Ultimate Mission, as designed and planned for nearly two decades, was to "Gain control of the United States and use its institutions for the political, social and economic destabilization of industrialized nations."  During his childhood, each day's game playing and education was directed at instilling in Will the psychological, physical, and personality traits needed to successfully complete the mission -- regardless of how long it may take.  The plan was so complete that it needed little modification during Will's youth.  The exception to this was realized when Will was 6 years old.  His trainers perceived his inability to organize operationally cohesive, dedicated small groups that could be given assignments and complete them without reservation and resignations.

To ameliorate Will's lacking, the trainers selected a female partner who would accompany Will during implementation of the Ultimate Mission.  Her assignment included complete loyalty and dedication to the mission.   Her training mandated that she would unceasingly work behind the shadows to build the organization regardless of Will's known shortcomings.  Her mission was to ensure Will's success regardless of changes in national or global political events and without concern for Will's expected wavering over the anticipated 25 year project.

Just before Stalin's death in 1953, there came a window through which Will could be placed with a surrogate family in an obscure town in an unnoticed southern state of the United States.  Will's female associate was named Cheskanzioka which roughly translated from Russian means 'hilarious'.  This label was a private joke with the KGB trainers because early on they noticed that she rarely laughed and only smiled when publicly meeting coworkers.  Cheskanzioka was assigned an American name.  The Ultimate Mission was underway.  The mechanisms were activated.   Will and his associate, although placed hundreds of miles apart in specifically selected lower and middle class families respectively, would not officially meet again until in college.

Each were thoroughly programmed and would receive booster doses of training periodically over the next years.  They knew the value to their homeland of the successful superpower takeover and global destabilization.   They were focused, top-notch students through their childhood and teen years.   The mechanisms supporting the Ultimate Mission ensured that each would gain access to correct institutions of learning and meet the right and malleable men and women who could consort with them toward success.  The KGB trainers knew that overall success was dependent upon these ancillary mechanisms.

One of the ancillary people assigned to ensure mission success would be from an established family and his work would be multi-faceted, requiring his on and off appearance in several roles of power.  His spotlight flash appearances reminding his KGB trainers of a stroboscopic light earned him his KGB code name.

The flawless KGB Ultimate Mission was executed to perfection over the years with Will meeting his associate in their college years.   Both were gathering the living moss of several subordinates, each one having special traits.  This rolling snowball of well-educated capabilities gathered mass and momentum in the 1960's.  The pair was well suited to ignite the circumstances.

Will's unnoticed southern state served as an easily conquered home and base to build and quietly congeal power.  This gave time to his cohorts to establish their own repertoires in related supporting roles and to clandestinely accumulate money  ---  the eventual catapult to national prominence.  Will's superfluous diversions over the years would almost derail the Ultimate Mission on occasions, but as his KGB trainers had envisioned, his associate held a tight grip on circumstances from the shadows and rescued it.  Will was the penultimate frontman;  his associate the quintessential invisible controlling hand.

On schedule, power was taken.  It was taken using the dark facilities and skills of Will and his associate.  It was taken while the populace cheered with the simplicity of children.  It was taken with the democratic institutions in full theoretical support.

The Ultimate Mission is a complete success.  Will and his associate have vectored onward to success as only a perfectly guided missile with infinite momentum could.

The Ultimate Mission is in its final stage.   Destabilization is evolving on political fronts.  Economic fronts will tumble out of place in chaos on schedule.

The people cheer their Constitution.

* * *    More to follow.   * * *


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